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Old May 18th, 2008, 05:24 PM   #3
Mark Williams
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Location: Atlanta, GA
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Nice work. Really smooth pans and tilts. I liked the rotating shots (maybe slightly over used). The small waterfall really caught my eye as well and the rain drops on the pine tree. The shift to the ax and campfire scene did not work for me and kind of disrupted the relaxing mood. Would like to see closer/macro shots of the flowers and running water which always fasinates me. The entire piece could probably be shortened just a bit only using your very best scenes.
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