December 20th, 2008, 10:56 AM
Hey all... Just finished a "trailer" of sorts for my videography. Let me know what you all think.
Tosti Studios Contemporary Video Documentation on Vimeo (http://www.vimeo.com/2583749)
As always, totally appreciate all your guys thoughts, critique and suggestions.
December 20th, 2008, 03:23 PM
It wasn't bad, but it also didn't really inspire me at all. You have some issues with camera-shake in quite a few shots, and the coloring could use some extra 'punch'. In terms of the flow the trailer didn't seem to have any direction or purpose to it. That's not a requirement, just something that appeals to me.
I like the shot that panned up from the bouquet to the couple, and the shot through the wooden railing, as well as some others.
December 20th, 2008, 06:21 PM
Agree with Travis. The shakes were distracting . You need to nail them down. Some of your framing was a little out as well. Thanks for posting.
Stephen J. Williams
December 20th, 2008, 07:41 PM
I wish I could film some weddings where they incorporate sparklers and creative things into the exit's.... I'm tired of watching the B&G just run out with nothing spectacular... Boring....
Anyways, I thought that your video was pretty good. I dont believe that many people would notice slight camera shake... I'm still doing my best to master "the walk". That is, to have as smooth of looking footage without using a glidecam or fig...
One thing that might have looked cool in a video like yours would be to show one wedding highlight start to end but replace the B&G on every shot... If that makes since. It would still fit to a timeline but you would be able to display the best shots of each wedding.
Thanks for posting.
December 22nd, 2008, 09:38 AM
Video got moved to this new address:
Tosti Studios Contemporary Video Documentation on Vimeo (http://vimeo.com/2601302)
Let me know what you guys think!
December 22nd, 2008, 10:14 AM
As has been said, needs work. Your moving shots need to be much steadier. They are ruining your video.
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