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February 9th, 2009, 12:49 AM
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First 30s Commercial
I have worked on quite a few video projects, but this is the first 30s commercial that I have actually produced. Please let me know your thoughts as i value the input of other DVInfo members.
(I know I know...its SD...unfortunately female centered stations in Idaho are not offered in HD on cable..maybe the next one will be for ESPN HD?) RenewedExpressions - 30sec Commercial ***Work in Progress*** By Andrew Allsbury On ExposureRoom |
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February 9th, 2009, 09:29 AM
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Bueller?....Bueller?
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February 9th, 2009, 10:00 AM
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Bueller called in sick today...
I thought it was well done and looked professional as opposed to some of those cheesy commercials that you see out there. It's a shame that it's in SD. Do you shoot it in HD and then down convert to SD or do you start with SD? |
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February 9th, 2009, 10:20 AM
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Well done. It was professional and clean. Nice coverage shots of merchandise and the shop, good shots of people in the environment, and a good shot/audio of the lady talking. Keep up the good work.
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February 9th, 2009, 01:09 PM
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deleted for double post, sorry
Last edited by Andrew Allsbury; February 9th, 2009 at 01:22 PM. Reason: Double post |
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February 9th, 2009, 01:21 PM
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Thank you for the kind reviews! Any other input?
Workflow on SD Project: - Shoot in HD - Edit the footage in HD - Export to SD - Import SD video to AE - Title, etc in AE - Export video back to premiere and finish audio - Export to Encore or back to tape! |
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February 10th, 2009, 09:02 AM
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Andrew,
I feel like the audio could use some work - to boost her voice and pull off some of the slight barely-hiss. But I've got to tell you, I am a complete amateur when it comes to audio, so I have no suggestions for you there. You can see from my exposure-room videos that my audio isn't the best. Nice video. Keep moving forward. Will |
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February 10th, 2009, 12:41 PM
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I thought it was nicely done. My only nit pick would be the fonts used, but that is my issue. :)
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February 10th, 2009, 02:07 PM
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I think the shot of the lady looking at the bag looks a little rehearsed/unnatural and lasts a second too long. It might of have been better with a shorter, closer shot with slower movement.
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February 13th, 2009, 07:32 PM
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Link doesn't seem to be working...
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February 14th, 2009, 03:29 PM
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link should be active, the final video is now posted. I agree on the fonts but since it is "their font" I'm kinda stuck. lol
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February 15th, 2009, 01:29 AM
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I liked it. Nice, now I'm looking forward to owning my Canon XH again (my last one got destroyed in a house fire)
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