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Old May 18th, 2007, 06:48 PM   #1
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30 Second Promo

Hello:

I've just finished making a 30 second television commercial advertising my wedding videography business. Please check it out and let me know what you think of it.

http://media.libsyn.com/media/silver...ding_Promo.m4v

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Old May 18th, 2007, 06:50 PM   #2
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Oops! I just realized that I had posted this to the wrong forum. Could somebody please move it to the Wedding and Event Videography forum??? Thanks!

Sorry about that.
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Old May 18th, 2007, 10:08 PM   #3
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Adam,

The videography looks pretty solid, but the first shot and a few others have blueish tint- not sure if that is intentional or a color temperature issue. If you C.C. those to match the rest and maybe make them all a little warmer it wouldn't hurt the overall feel.

Not sure about the choice of music or the graphics- they feel a little jarring, personally...the only thing I'd definitely recommend changing is the end title screen, that silver font doesn't hold up very well against that mottled blue texture- taxing designs like that are harder to take information from.

I'd make all your title screens more high contrast, and make your phone number a LOT more noticeable (especially if you aren't listing an easy-to-remember web address).

The best marketing is a good product or service, and it looks like you have that already...so if you're gonna spend $$ on TV airtime you may as well make sure the spot results in some calls.
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Old May 19th, 2007, 05:10 AM   #4
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I liked it, but I would recommend a more understated logo.
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