DVC9--Thanks for Lunch--Paul Firth!
Another entry that I thought deserved some recognition and had no feedback thread that I could find.
Nice job Paul. Liked the twist at the end and was happy to see it. Mike |
Good solid production. Clear and complete story with 30 seconds to spare, very nice. A little predictable. At lunch I thought it might have been an affair, but as soon as you didn't show her face for the cookie thing I knew who she was. (How is it that she managed to work all day and come home and make cookies before he even gets home?)
Smile, Kris |
Ahhh, a nice piece....and with a reverse twist no less. The pacing on this was really good, aided in part by a really good selection of angles and shots, and of course great musical selections to keep the mood just right.
I admit, ya got me. I wasn't sure where everything was going at the half-way point...I thought I knew following the family photos, etc, but then they way you scripted, shot, and especially scored the piece from her office to him driving into the driveway pulled me for a bit of a loop, which I expect was the intention, only to have the reverse twist at the end coming full circle to my first thought. Well done. A complete story in a very short time, that wasn't rushed or frantic. A very solid production. -Jon |
Great piece. You had me going too. Hey did I get to your title first? LOL Great work, loved it.
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-Jon |
I loved the twist, anticipating the affair thing made me a bit uncomfortable, so a nice happy ending for all!
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Thanks a lot for your feedback everyone. Sorry I didn't respond before now but have been out of town and busy at work.
It was my first production and I found out that ideas don't play out exactly on film the way they do in my head. The hardest part was directing my wife in bed with a friend of ours (Jacob) who is almost 20 years younger than we are. |
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