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Old January 5th, 2007, 04:14 PM   #16
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This is a great concept...I'm one for holding memories in objects from the past and cloths sometimes...even if they are dreadful and out of fashion :) The piece was nicely written and fit the theme very well indeed. I didn't like the 'memories' shots too much, they didn't look faded just....well, blurred I guess. I also think there was possibly too much shot repetition, with filling the drum and panning around the garments...I know this told the story but it kind of needed livening up a bit I guess....I hope you know what I mean. My only other point was there was maybe a bit to much in the script to take in for me. I really liked the script, it was great. But it was maybe a case of less may have been more.

Anyway on the whole lovely idea, well executed with a well written script:)
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