Give me your thoughts
 

Hey all,

I'm putting the finishing touches on a 30 second commercial for my company that is bound for broadcast. I'd like to hear your opinions and/or recommendations before it's sent to the broadcasting company. Here's a link.

After viewing the commercial, are you compelled to visit my website to find out more information?

Do you think that it's too ambiguous as to what my company offers? The idea was just to arouse curiosity in the viewer, and leave the specifics of the business on the website, which is mentioned at the end.

Please let me know your thoughts.

Thanks!