Please help critique the camerwork in this clip

This is from a straight-ahead contest video that I shot recently. One camera, one take, no rehearsal, no editing to hide behind. Please ignore the subject matter for the moment (that's hard to do, I know!) and help me by critiquing the camerawork, which is always my weakest link.

What do you like about the way it was shot? What DON'T you like about it? What would you have done differently?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=puTIphmRvP0

Thanks in advance for your time,
Mike




www.mikepulcinella.com

[Michael Pulcinella]

Originally Posted by Bert Smyth

I found going to NAB so worthwhile, time and money well spent.

Thanks Bert. Some great advice in your post!