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Interesting. I like the theme/subject, but I think it didn't deliver what was promised. I was expecting more, and instead got what seemed to be a lot of random / uninteresting shots that had nothing to do with the theme/subject. Definitely an interesting topic for a video, but I wish you could have shown more pertinent shots about "what video drives you".
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Regular Crew
Join Date: May 2007
Location: Brookings Oregon
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I could have put some compelling video of news and politics and other stuff. I like to think that I put everything into it that was shot by myself and not copyrighted. I'm really not into that sort of thing.
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Yeah that's a good thing. But I still would have liked more shots (by you) that said "Family" "Entertainment" "Politics", etc. I think you could make it a strong piece if it had more pertinent video. The editing and music are well done, it's just the content doesn't match.
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Well back to the drawing board we go. Thanks for the insight on what you think I really appreciate it seriously. Good thing about video is you can edit it over and over again. What would you suggest on politics? Family I can do. Sports might be hard since there are usually so many people watching and I would have to get their sigs for filming. Entertainment is so vast that one should be easy.
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Regular Crew
Join Date: May 2007
Location: Brookings Oregon
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Well I removed it so I could try and rework it out to some of your suggestions Thanks for the input.
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Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: San Diego, CA
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So, wait, you took it down based on the critique of one guy? Are you curious to see what anyone else thought, or if other people had other thoughts or ideas?
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Regular Crew
Join Date: May 2007
Location: Brookings Oregon
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I had it on other forums also. I got a few replies but for the most part no comments on it. I figured I would try and rework it based on some of the ideas that were given. What your critique said was almost mirrored on a few other sites. Now I have a common idea of where to go. I will repost after a few more runs with it!
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