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Old November 10th, 2008, 03:36 AM   #1
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new commercial i shoot very funy a must see!!

YouTube - Tiffany from my NY trip

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Old November 10th, 2008, 08:03 AM   #2
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Hi Ram,

Nice idea and well shot. I just found it slow. Would make a great 30 spot. Like the shot "she sent me the card" is completely unnecessary.

The opening shots cuts away just as the two extras enter the frame, which bothered me. You should slip the shot so that they establish themselves better.

Well done, though.
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Old November 10th, 2008, 12:48 PM   #3
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funny. I agree on the cut on the first shot. could also be tightened where the co-worker slides over. Did you intend for the first two shots to be un-level? I found that disconcerting.
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Old November 11th, 2008, 02:39 AM   #4
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thanks for the replays
since i just shot it for pro company and had nothing to do with the editing i have nothing to do about it

but i can't agree more with you
the two shot is just not a good take that they decided to take (don't know way):(
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Old November 11th, 2008, 06:21 AM   #5
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I didn't realize you only shot it. In that case, great job!
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Old November 11th, 2008, 06:26 AM   #6
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Yes, I agree. Needed tighter editing, but shooting was outstanding!
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Old November 12th, 2008, 12:37 AM   #7
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thank you all
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Old November 15th, 2008, 01:42 PM   #8
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that was funny. Good stuff man
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Old June 3rd, 2009, 11:35 AM   #9
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Great stuff

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