First try with music video at DVinfo.net

Lukas Siewior · January 16th, 2009, 11:08 PM

Here is a music video I've shot with my friends for a small contest.

I'd like to hear your opinions - specialy about overall look. I know that some scenes are overexposed - what would be your sugestion to make those signs more readable???

Enjoy!
YouTube - Above & Beyond - Oceanlab - On A Good Day (competition video)

or here:
Above & Beyond - Oceanlab - On a Good Day on Vimeo

Sam Rosado · January 19th, 2009, 09:26 AM

great video! I love the song. the only thing that disturbs me is the writing on the paper which in some shots you cant see. other than that its great. good job

Lukas Siewior · January 19th, 2009, 01:41 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sam Rosado

great video! I love the song. the only thing that disturbs me is the writing on the paper which in some shots you cant see. other than that its great. good job

Thx. I'm well aware of the writing. We couldn't tell if its readable enough untill post. Other issue was that on big computer screen the writing looks better then on YouTube. I guess next time Ill use bigger paper and thicker markers :-)

Charles Mabry · January 19th, 2009, 06:29 PM

Brilliant Idea.... Great great job. Im a new film student and the work on here as just amazing. Larger paper and marker next time!

January 16th, 2009, 11:08 PM	#1
Lukas Siewior Major Player Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Lyndhurst, NJ, USA Posts: 408	First try with music video Here is a music video I've shot with my friends for a small contest. I'd like to hear your opinions - specialy about overall look. I know that some scenes are overexposed - what would be your sugestion to make those signs more readable??? Enjoy! YouTube - Above & Beyond - Oceanlab - On A Good Day (competition video) or here: Above & Beyond - Oceanlab - On a Good Day on Vimeo

January 19th, 2009, 09:26 AM	#2
Sam Rosado Regular Crew Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: bridgeport ct Posts: 161	great video! I love the song. the only thing that disturbs me is the writing on the paper which in some shots you cant see. other than that its great. good job __________________ "Catering to all of your needs, from A to V."

January 19th, 2009, 06:29 PM	#4
Charles Mabry Regular Crew Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: North Carolina Posts: 64	Brilliant Idea.... Great great job. Im a new film student and the work on here as just amazing. Larger paper and marker next time!