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Major Player
Join Date: Feb 2005
Location: Worldwide
Posts: 938
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Nice work, Jonathan. There was a lovely relaxed mood to the video.
I would have been tempted to cut the sequence a bit shorter, and also maybe left out the guy smoking and a few of the landscape clips that were too similar to earlier clips. The sloping horizon section did jar somewhat compared to the other clips. What I probably miss most were the addition of some native wildlife/birds etc., and also to lower the background music in some of the footage so as to listen to the natural sounds of the forest, running water etc. To add interest, I think that some clips need to be added that were taken during the 'magic-light' of dawn and dusk, with maybe some misty scenes and low beams of sunlight etc., to improve the atmosphere. |
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Regular Crew
Join Date: Nov 2008
Location: Torbay, UK
Posts: 78
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Hi thanks for the response,
Yeah I argee with what you said, sadlly there didnt seem to be much wildlife other than cows. I really want to spend a full day there one day to get the different lighting, only spent a couple of hours there, hence the limited shots. Thanks alot for the feedback, I will post actual work on here in the future, got a few videos for Paignton Zoo and weddings coming up. |
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