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New Boot
Join Date: Sep 2009
Location: Triad Area, NC
Posts: 10
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That was pretty sweet. The color scheme, the jib work, great stuff. I watched seasons 1 and 2 of The Tudors on Showtime recently, and their jousting sequences weren't as good as that at all.
The transitions scene to scene could maybe use tweaking though, some of them seem a little abrupt and not smooth. Particularly from the meeting to the joust, that could use some overlap. Secondly I might suggest that you cut a little sooner when he's riding away from his lady, because I see him go off the path, regain the path, and stop. You probably want him still moving when you leave the scene. Overall though good job! |
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Regular Crew
Join Date: Jul 2009
Location: San Jose, CA,, USA
Posts: 89
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I really liked it. I'm a bit confused as to what happens around 6:25, though; the black knight reacts as if he's just be stabbed in the gut, but the angle of the silver knight's sword would be at his feet, if anything...
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Tourist
Join Date: Jun 2009
Location: Finland
Posts: 4
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Hehe. We had a huge problems with the guy who is the one stabbing. He is so shortsighted he couldn't see nothing and believe, in a shoot he almost killed the opponent....
But they survived.. Jaakko |
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