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Old January 22nd, 2010, 12:46 AM   #1
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Here's a short video I put together for a new surf shop in Hawaii. It's going to premiere on a big screen at a boxing match in a stadium this Saturday. I hope it looks good... Comments please!

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Old January 22nd, 2010, 07:20 AM   #2
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Just a few quick things ....

The boom at the beginning sounds a tad distorted. Don't know if this is the case or not.

Outdoor footage has got stunningly good colour, and it really contrasts with the in-shop lighting. Kinda makes the shop look not as good as the outdoors.

Do wish that some of the shots of the surfers were zoomed in a bit tighter on the action.

The song used sounds like the right thing to appeal to the hearts of those whom I presume is their target audience. Surfing is their escape to freedom, yada yada yada.

Phone number at the end needs to be a bit bigger in size and longer in duration. Not that people are going to memorise it from the ad, but .... you know.

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Old January 22nd, 2010, 01:43 PM   #3
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Thanks Andrew, hows the weather down under today?
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Old January 22nd, 2010, 10:52 PM   #4
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Quite warm. Just the perfect summer weather to be on the beach!

With Australia Day (public holiday) on Tuesday, a lot of people make it effectively a 4 day weekend by taking Monday off. We Aussies love our long weekends.

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