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Old May 20th, 2010, 11:33 AM   #1
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Hercules Fence Web Commercial

Hey Everyone,

I'm done with this video, but I'm curious to hear feedback from some other working pros. It's basically an extended web commercial that describes a bit about their business. It's 3mins which is probably way too long but that was the target length I was given so I went with it. Also, I figure the target customer would be someone interested in learning more about fences--which is why they are at the site in the first place.

I didn't have much time on this one and I'm booked with other work, so this just kind of came out this way. With that said, I still feel like I'm trying to get to the next level on my own productions and can't quite get there. Thoughts (other than quit the business)?

Thanks in advance for any feedback.


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Old May 24th, 2010, 12:50 PM   #2
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FWIW, I thought it looked really well done. The graphics looked fine... the only thing I would've changed was to have the stills fill the whole frame (but they may have been too small...).
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Old May 25th, 2010, 08:43 AM   #3
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Nice job, good pace and the VO was well-suited to the product. Only suggestion is to pop the phone and website up occasionally for people who don't want/need to watch all the way through.
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Old May 28th, 2010, 09:01 AM   #4
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Thanks Guys for the feedback and suggestions. It is really nice to hear feedback, so thanks for taking the time to post.

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