Please Critique my Demo Reel - for Entry level position
 

Hello everyone, I am in school now for video production, and I have experience from volunteer work as a studio camera operator and my internship where I edit, and do ENG videography/photography work (also did wedding videography but not very professional). I'm getting a lot of experience (I think) and I just put a demo reel together to try to obtain an entry level position somewhere (I'm going to apply everywhere, I don't graduate until October but I'm still applying now). Please critique the demo reel if you will, be as honest as you can, because I am looking to learn and grow and be the best I can be in this field. Thanks a lot in advance and here is the link to my demo:


If this helps, the demo reel is to get a job doing editing and videography, that's all I had to show, but wouldn't mind working anywhere in the field as long as my foot is in the door, will this reel be acceptable then?
Thanks again!