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Old November 5th, 2012, 10:46 AM   #1
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Step by Step | passing time

I'd like to share a short film about beauty of everyday life, falling leaves, and passing time

Location: Bory Tucholskie (Poland) Directed: mojebory
Edited: mojebory
Shot: mojebory
Color grading: mojebory
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Music: Sigur Rós

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Old November 6th, 2012, 07:48 AM   #2
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Mariusz,

There was some excellent framing, colour and angles in that film, but I have to say I really struggled with the continuity. To me, it just didn't flow in its present state. Its almost as if its a series of stills tied together to make a film. I couldn't work out how it tied in with passing time.

On the flip side, I loved some of the framing and colour.

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Old November 7th, 2012, 01:06 AM   #3
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Hi Alan,

Thanks for your feedback... I did as I could... maybe next time ;)
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Old November 7th, 2012, 07:46 AM   #4
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I think the framing and colors are pretty good. :)
I think the story could be better told if some of the footages are rearranged to improve the continuity of the video.
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Old November 7th, 2012, 10:32 PM   #5
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Thank you for your feedback,

Maybe you didn't notice that almost every part of this film is an analogy... or maybe I did something wrong ;)

Greetings from Poland
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Old November 7th, 2012, 11:56 PM   #6
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Mariusz

Great work. One or the most pleasing pieces I have watched of late. Nice clear narrative, poetic, evocative; I enjoyed every bit of it. Just gorgeous. Congratulations.

Thanks so much for sharing.

Greetings to you from New Zealand.

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Old November 8th, 2012, 09:26 AM   #7
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Hi John,

thank you so much for watching ;)

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