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February 14th, 2013, 05:39 PM
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Join Date: Mar 2012
Location: Hamilton, New Zealand
Posts: 747
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5 Finger Shoes Promo
Hey guys,
This is a short promo I shot and edited last year. Was hoping to get some feedback/constructive criticism :) Notes: White balance is off in places, plus a bit of shakey cam. I've learnt a lot since then. |
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February 19th, 2013, 03:13 AM
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Major Player
Join Date: Nov 2009
Location: No Fixed Address :) Western Australia
Posts: 275
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Re: 5 Finger Shoes Promo
Hi Jody,
I think you could use a bit of fill lighting on the faces of the interviewees', they would look better with a bit of light in their eyes. With Paul, I think it would have been good to have him sitting in the shade, even looking casual under an umbrella maybe :) or put a hat on him then use fill lighting from a disc down low. He has deep set eyes which tend to disappear if not lit correctly. He looked strained by the sun. I think your shot at either 1:54 or 1:59 would look really good in slo mo, great for your product. Music suited the beginning but IMO got a bit wearing by the end. Otherwise well done. Al |
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