DAY:11 Short Film

Alexey Malyshev · October 26th, 2005, 12:43 PM

Enjoyed watching it. The sound was almost too good and too clear. Also I think he said he was "100 clicks" from the pick up zone - that's 100 km (~60miles). I know you had time constraints, I believe having written dialogues would help, even if it's just for the purpose of actors looking at it and improvising later. Everything else was already said. Very nice work.

Alex

Geoffrey Engelbrecht · October 29th, 2005, 01:47 AM

I liked it a lot as well.

The music and action gave it a very video gamish feel. I don't know if that was what you were after, but in that context I was ok with the guy in the small tent because the whole thing seemed a little artificial (one American soldier against a platoon of Iraqis). It added to the atmosphere of the film.

I agree though 100 clicks is a mighty long distance to trek to a landing zone.

Best Regards,

Geoff

October 26th, 2005, 12:43 PM	#16
Alexey Malyshev New Boot Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Fairbanks, AK Posts: 16	Enjoyed watching it. The sound was almost too good and too clear. Also I think he said he was "100 clicks" from the pick up zone - that's 100 km (~60miles). I know you had time constraints, I believe having written dialogues would help, even if it's just for the purpose of actors looking at it and improvising later. Everything else was already said. Very nice work. Alex

October 29th, 2005, 01:47 AM	#17
Geoffrey Engelbrecht Regular Crew Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Switzerland Posts: 56	I liked it a lot as well. The music and action gave it a very video gamish feel. I don't know if that was what you were after, but in that context I was ok with the guy in the small tent because the whole thing seemed a little artificial (one American soldier against a platoon of Iraqis). It added to the atmosphere of the film. I agree though 100 clicks is a mighty long distance to trek to a landing zone. Best Regards, Geoff