Short film for your critique
 

Hey guys,

Just finished a new short film that I would like to show you. Very important theme in this story and we tried to be as sober as possible. It's a bit stylized and oppressive but I think in the end it leaves you with a positive feeling that it's both hopeful and complex. Hope you enjoy it.


Pass: insidefilmscreener

Let me know what you think.

Re: Short film for your critique
 

I think you need to check your password.

Re: Short film for your critique
 

Right you are Donald. Just corrected in the original post.

Re: Short film for your critique
 

Is the password working now?

Re: Short film for your critique
 

It's not working

Re: Short film for your critique
 

That's weird... Just double checked. Password is insidefilmscreener. Anyone else having problems viewing the video?

Re: Short film for your critique
 

Can't see it, just provide a direct link to Vimeo.

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Here it is

vimeo.com/340405576

Re: Short film for your critique
 

Hey guys, just wondering if anyone was able to load the video.

Thanks

Re: Short film for your critique
 

The password works for me but the link doesn't.

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Trailer is out :

Re: Short film for your critique
 

Hey David,

I was able to see the whole thing. I like the shooting, well done for this type of flic. I would be critical of the audio mix though. It is over the top. There are times when the male actor is clearly not breathing heavy. But it seems to me you added loud heavy breathing in post for the effect. To me, it is so overpowering and out of place it sounds like a third person is in the room watching them.

Well done short. I hope it works for you.

Kind Regards,

Steve

Re: Short film for your critique
 

Hey Steven, thanks for watching. Yeah, I am still not happy with some bits of the heavy breathing. If you have the time, could you point out for the parts that distracted you the most?

Thanks!