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Old June 6th, 2019, 07:19 AM   #1
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Short film for your critique

Hey guys,

Just finished a new short film that I would like to show you. Very important theme in this story and we tried to be as sober as possible. It's a bit stylized and oppressive but I think in the end it leaves you with a positive feeling that it's both hopeful and complex. Hope you enjoy it.


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Old June 6th, 2019, 10:20 AM   #2
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I think you need to check your password.
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Old June 6th, 2019, 12:14 PM   #3
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Right you are Donald. Just corrected in the original post.
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Old June 8th, 2019, 06:29 AM   #4
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Is the password working now?
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Old June 9th, 2019, 10:27 AM   #5
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It's not working
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Old June 9th, 2019, 12:08 PM   #6
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That's weird... Just double checked. Password is insidefilmscreener. Anyone else having problems viewing the video?
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Old June 9th, 2019, 12:48 PM   #7
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Can't see it, just provide a direct link to Vimeo.
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Old June 9th, 2019, 01:04 PM   #8
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Here it is

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Old June 13th, 2019, 07:51 AM   #9
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Hey guys, just wondering if anyone was able to load the video.

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Old June 13th, 2019, 08:59 AM   #10
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The password works for me but the link doesn't.
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Old June 29th, 2019, 02:30 AM   #11
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Trailer is out :

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Old July 18th, 2019, 11:16 AM   #12
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Hey David,

I was able to see the whole thing. I like the shooting, well done for this type of flic. I would be critical of the audio mix though. It is over the top. There are times when the male actor is clearly not breathing heavy. But it seems to me you added loud heavy breathing in post for the effect. To me, it is so overpowering and out of place it sounds like a third person is in the room watching them.

Well done short. I hope it works for you.

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