"The Date" new short film
Check out a new short film I did and please give any feedback, postive or negative, including any constructive criticism. Thanks guys.
http://www.youtube.com/profile?user=SuperbadDuke Its 5 minutes. Around 19MB. Hsould play for everyone on youtube. |
Great work!
Very funny... the acting was pretty good as well. Nice look too! I would have liked a longer shot of the shirt the camera guy was wearing... maybe with a better quality clip it wouldn't be an issue. Mike |
Brian,
I really enjoyed it. The acting was pretty good as well as the story. Do you care to share you encoding settings for youtube. |
Duke, that was absolutely awesome. Nicely shot and composed, excellent acting, beautiful look.
The only thing I wonder about is that the editing was pretty fast -- not a lot of pauses between conversations -- but that may have been your point, to make us as bewildered and bombarded as the guy. Nice work. |
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I really liked it. The icing on the cake was the German film crew. The cake was that actress. She's really talented. She fired off dialog like a gatling gun and looked cute along the way. I loved the way the editing accentuated her vacillating attitude which kept Nevada, and the audience, off balance.
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Thanks Marcus. Really appreciate the encouragement. Filmmakers work hard and long on projects and to get a satisfactory response is always helpful.. Obviously I welcome negative and constructive comments too.
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that was great
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I think most of it is very well done and was pleasant to watch, definitely way above average.
Some remarks: the scene with the German crew coming in felt a little bit messy and rushed, it could have been shot in a 'tighter' way to make it feel like it's really the climax of the short. The lighting was also very nice but, and I don't know if this was intentional, it did feel more like it was lit like a commercial and while that does have a nice look, it makes everything feel less real. But I am struggling with lighting myself and would love to hear how exactly you lit it, what was the equipment etc, because I did think it looked real nice. |
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Loved it. Do you have quicktime version? I hate youtube quality.
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Here is the link for better quality: http://hd-motionpictures.com/The%20Date.html |
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