My first 30sec ad--looking for feedback
 

Hey Y'all,
here's a thirty sec clip that might work for a TV spot or placement on a website. It's supposed to engender 'longing for summer' or something similar.

Let me know what your reactions are, especially camera work, pacing, music bed, color, anything else.

you can see the HD version here: http://www.vimeo.com/702420 Clicking on "FULL" brings up the HD, otherwise is downscaled SD.

For what it is looks fine, steady footage, colors match, music leads to either a relaxing theme or adventurous theme. I would probably put a rack focus on the flowers rather than a pull zoom. Good luck.