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Marj Atkins · September 12th, 2009, 12:41 PM

Hi Vidar
My apologies for not commenting on your film last round. You have some really beautiful footage Vidar - nice variety from wide landscape to close-up details. The only thing I am sorry about is that I won't be able to understand your final Norwegian story - looks like it 's going to be very good.
One small thing - I feel that there were too many back views of the people in this video - maybe restrict it to one or two. Showing the boots walking was one good way of showing the presence of people in the scene. Perhaps a few front views of people in the landscape taken from a good distance would also work (if you don't really want to feature in your movie, that is). :)

September 12th, 2009, 12:41 PM	#46
Marj Atkins Major Player Join Date: May 2007 Location: Johannesburg South Africa Posts: 768	Hi Vidar My apologies for not commenting on your film last round. You have some really beautiful footage Vidar - nice variety from wide landscape to close-up details. The only thing I am sorry about is that I won't be able to understand your final Norwegian story - looks like it 's going to be very good. One small thing - I feel that there were too many back views of the people in this video - maybe restrict it to one or two. Showing the boots walking was one good way of showing the presence of people in the scene. Perhaps a few front views of people in the landscape taken from a good distance would also work (if you don't really want to feature in your movie, that is). :)