UWOL 50 - Nature speaks in colours

Paul Mailath · March 5th, 2019, 01:18 AM

At least I completed one this time - it was very much a last minute thing and the only thing I'm happy about was that it's here. The footage was mostly from Mt Penang Gardens about 40 minutes away with some b-roll from the bush up the road. My fascination for shallow DOF is a tad excessive in this piece. let rip, level 1 - I can only improve

Bob Safay · March 5th, 2019, 07:23 AM

Paul, congratulations in submitting and entry. Overall it was a very nice video. Like you I had to go to a public gardens. I agree with your own assessment, way too many shots showing shallow DOF. I used to do the same thing, always going for the closeup and neglecting the overall beauty of the environment that the subject was in. The music was really good and the camera movements were smooth and steady. Your color was pleasing and not oversaturated. Again, my only criticism was that you used to many closeups and way to much DOF. Bob

Chris Hurd · March 5th, 2019, 11:16 AM

A look at Australian flora from a macro point of view -- something I had not seen before. Many thanks, Paul!

Gordon Hoffman · March 5th, 2019, 07:24 PM

Paul I didn't really have a problem with the shallow DOF on a short piece like this but I guess a variety of shots are always better. One thing is I felt the music was a little loud compared to the narration but maybe that's just me.

Gordon

Trond Saetre · March 6th, 2019, 03:31 AM

Hi Paul,

Glad you were able to submit your film. It's a nice one.

I am also a fan of the shallow depth of field. The texture at 0:41, is really cool, and same can be said about the following shot. Loved that one!

As you and others have mentioned already, I am missing some wide shots. A wide shot intro, to let us see "where you are," would improve your film.

The soundtrack is too loud. Especially from around 1:10 you can hear some noise. Possible cause is due to the sound level maxing out. You could try to reduce the sound by around 3 to 6dB and see if it improves.

Some shots are a little over exposed. (I see several others, including myself, have this "issue")
It can be tricky to get it "perfect." I prefer to "error" by under exposing if I can't get it right while filming, as this is easier to correct in post.

Thanks for sharing! Well done!

Mick Jenner · March 6th, 2019, 04:09 AM

Hi Paul,

Lovely entry Paul, enjoyed very much.

There is not a lot more I can add to the previous comments.

As a point of interest the clip a 0.42 shows a branch with black thread like fungus running through it, When (if) felled this log would be much treasured by wood turners for its black patterns when turned.

Mick

Geir Inge · March 6th, 2019, 05:25 PM

Hi Paul.
Nice entry.
You have nice flow on the editing rhythm, the same goes for VO and music.
I don't have much to complain about. Maybe something more variety in long and medium shots?
I especially like the effect of the close ups with pan.
It gives a special effect of being in the movie.
Well, at least that's my opinion.
Thank you for sharing.

Phil Murray · March 7th, 2019, 06:57 AM

Like the others, I really like shallow DOF to focus in the subject. I thought that the constant changing of focus in shots might have been a little too much, but I tend to prefer static shots. Still, I thought it worked great on many of the shots and was not just appropriate, but it enhanced the shots greatly.

I'll be honest, I started watching after reading all the comments and though it was going to be a little boring because I really don't care much for flowers or other flora, but I was wrong! I was totally enthralled with how you captured stuff that I normally wouldn't care about. For example, the shot of the flower at 2:03 was so beautiful that I actually hit pause so I could look at it longer!

March 5th, 2019, 01:18 AM	#1
Paul Mailath Trustee Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Central Coast - NSW, Australia Posts: 1,606	UWOL 50 - Nature speaks in colours - Paul Mailath At least I completed one this time - it was very much a last minute thing and the only thing I'm happy about was that it's here. The footage was mostly from Mt Penang Gardens about 40 minutes away with some b-roll from the bush up the road. My fascination for shallow DOF is a tad excessive in this piece. let rip, level 1 - I can only improve UWOL50 Nature speaks in colours by Paul Mailath on Vimeo __________________ Cheers - Paul M. www.perbenyik.com Last edited by Paul Mailath; March 5th, 2019 at 04:30 PM.

March 5th, 2019, 07:23 AM	#2
Bob Safay Trustee Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Atlanta, GA Posts: 1,557	Re: UWOL 50 - Nature speaks in colours - Paul Mailath Paul, congratulations in submitting and entry. Overall it was a very nice video. Like you I had to go to a public gardens. I agree with your own assessment, way too many shots showing shallow DOF. I used to do the same thing, always going for the closeup and neglecting the overall beauty of the environment that the subject was in. The music was really good and the camera movements were smooth and steady. Your color was pleasing and not oversaturated. Again, my only criticism was that you used to many closeups and way to much DOF. Bob

March 5th, 2019, 11:16 AM	#3
Chris Hurd Obstreperous Rex Join Date: Jan 2001 Location: San Marcos, TX Posts: 27,366 Images: 513	Re: UWOL 50 - Nature speaks in colours - Paul Mailath A look at Australian flora from a macro point of view -- something I had not seen before. Many thanks, Paul! __________________ CH Search DV Info Net \| 20 years of DVi \| ...Tuesday is Soylent Green Day!

March 5th, 2019, 07:24 PM	#4
Gordon Hoffman Major Player Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Pincher Creek, Alberta Canada Posts: 619	Re: UWOL 50 - Nature speaks in colours - Paul Mailath Paul I didn't really have a problem with the shallow DOF on a short piece like this but I guess a variety of shots are always better. One thing is I felt the music was a little loud compared to the narration but maybe that's just me. Gordon

March 6th, 2019, 03:31 AM	#5
Trond Saetre Inner Circle Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Bergen, Norway Posts: 3,375	Re: UWOL 50 - Nature speaks in colours - Paul Mailath Hi Paul, Glad you were able to submit your film. It's a nice one. I am also a fan of the shallow depth of field. The texture at 0:41, is really cool, and same can be said about the following shot. Loved that one! As you and others have mentioned already, I am missing some wide shots. A wide shot intro, to let us see "where you are," would improve your film. The soundtrack is too loud. Especially from around 1:10 you can hear some noise. Possible cause is due to the sound level maxing out. You could try to reduce the sound by around 3 to 6dB and see if it improves. Some shots are a little over exposed. (I see several others, including myself, have this "issue") It can be tricky to get it "perfect." I prefer to "error" by under exposing if I can't get it right while filming, as this is easier to correct in post. Thanks for sharing! Well done!

March 6th, 2019, 04:09 AM	#6
Mick Jenner Major Player Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: West Sussex England Posts: 843	Re: UWOL 50 - Nature speaks in colours - Paul Mailath Hi Paul, Lovely entry Paul, enjoyed very much. There is not a lot more I can add to the previous comments. As a point of interest the clip a 0.42 shows a branch with black thread like fungus running through it, When (if) felled this log would be much treasured by wood turners for its black patterns when turned. Mick

March 6th, 2019, 05:25 PM	#7
Geir Inge Trustee Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Larsnes, Norway Posts: 1,342	Re: UWOL 50 - Nature speaks in colours - Paul Mailath Hi Paul. Nice entry. You have nice flow on the editing rhythm, the same goes for VO and music. I don't have much to complain about. Maybe something more variety in long and medium shots? I especially like the effect of the close ups with pan. It gives a special effect of being in the movie. Well, at least that's my opinion. Thank you for sharing. __________________ Geir Inge B. Brekke Visit me at: https://vimeo.com/gibbfilm

March 7th, 2019, 06:57 AM	#8
Phil Murray Major Player Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: Cusco, Peru Posts: 375	Re: UWOL 50 - Nature speaks in colours - Paul Mailath Like the others, I really like shallow DOF to focus in the subject. I thought that the constant changing of focus in shots might have been a little too much, but I tend to prefer static shots. Still, I thought it worked great on many of the shots and was not just appropriate, but it enhanced the shots greatly. I'll be honest, I started watching after reading all the comments and though it was going to be a little boring because I really don't care much for flowers or other flora, but I was wrong! I was totally enthralled with how you captured stuff that I normally wouldn't care about. For example, the shot of the flower at 2:03 was so beautiful that I actually hit pause so I could look at it longer!