Jennifer + Greg Wedding Teaser at DVinfo.net

Jennifer + Greg Wedding Teaser · April 23rd, 2009, 03:43 PM

This teaser is probably the most different we have done as we experimented with lots of new ideas and color correction. You decide for yourself.

I didn't personally film this as our team did but I put it together.

http://vimeo.com/4301166

Would love feedback.

Darren Smith · April 23rd, 2009, 10:14 PM

Hi Jawad

The piece really felt like an experiment, I felt there was too much experimentation with colour grading ( I know that is what you set out to do), and that took away the continuity of the piece, I thought the time lapse worked well with the music in places, and the male speaking towards the end speech went too long for my liking. Overall the audio was not great, we have all fell victim to that, I most definately have. So it didn't really gel for me, but I am no expert, only offering feedback as requested.

It is good to experiment, absolutely, but I would not collectively represent that in one piece.

Cheers
Darren

Jawad Mir · April 23rd, 2009, 10:28 PM

Yes the audio wasn't the best. I did what I can to rectify it. As for end speech. I went back and forth in terms of putting it in or not but in the end, I knew the bride will get a kick so I left it in.

Color grading..yes I did do a lot of it. Hopefully next time a definitely less

thanks for honest feedback.

April 23rd, 2009, 10:28 PM	#3
Jawad Mir Major Player Join Date: May 2008 Location: Canada Posts: 371	Yes the audio wasn't the best. I did what I can to rectify it. As for end speech. I went back and forth in terms of putting it in or not but in the end, I knew the bride will get a kick so I left it in. Color grading..yes I did do a lot of it. Hopefully next time a definitely less thanks for honest feedback. __________________ Jawad Mir / Cinematographer . Filmmaker Film Style Weddings http://www.filmstyleweddings.com Jawad Mir http://www.jawadmir.com

April 23rd, 2009, 10:14 PM	#2
Darren Smith Regular Crew Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Bli Bli Qld Australia Posts: 93	Hi Jawad The piece really felt like an experiment, I felt there was too much experimentation with colour grading ( I know that is what you set out to do), and that took away the continuity of the piece, I thought the time lapse worked well with the music in places, and the male speaking towards the end speech went too long for my liking. Overall the audio was not great, we have all fell victim to that, I most definately have. So it didn't really gel for me, but I am no expert, only offering feedback as requested. It is good to experiment, absolutely, but I would not collectively represent that in one piece. Cheers Darren