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Old May 3rd, 2009, 09:07 PM   #1
Wedding Clip Trailer at BALI, please give comment
Johan Wahyudi Susanto Johan Wahyudi Susanto is offline May 3rd, 2009, 09:07 PM

Hi all, we are a newcomer in this forum, please give comment to our wedding clip video. It takes at BALI.
http://vimeo.com/4313037
Thanks before. Your comments are our pleasure.

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Old May 3rd, 2009, 09:47 PM   #2
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Hi fellow indonesian :)

I think you need some closer shots like CU or MS on the clip.

I think that the first line of words are a bit hard to be seen.

I think the clip is too concentrating on the "bali" then the couple itself.

Overall, there are nice scenery in there and nice moments with the couple.

Good work!!!

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Old May 3rd, 2009, 11:21 PM   #3
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Hello Santo, thanks 4 u're comments.
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Old May 4th, 2009, 10:01 AM   #4
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Hi Johan,

I would not have known this was a wedding trailer! unless you said.

It reminded me of one of those ads for sandals from the 1990's, or a advert for a holiday.

Some reasoanble footage throughout. A little unsteady in places, but with this location I think you missed some greater opportunities to be more creative with the couple.

The highlight for me was the waterfall.

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Old May 4th, 2009, 08:11 PM   #5
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Hello John,

First, we'd like to thanks for watching our video, And yeah, you are right about "wrong" post title, thanks for your correction :)

If you see, the point of this video is on the last tag "record video production ready to you everywhere", it mean about our video ads trailer. So we do a "missed some greater opportunities with the couple".

We'll post another video in this forum and waiting for your advise.
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Old May 5th, 2009, 12:32 AM   #6
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You might want to consider fixing your grammar on the last line. It is a bit confusing. One option would be "Record Video...ready where you are" or "Record Video Production; Ready for you anywhere" or "Record Video Productions...there when you need us"

I'm a huge fan of Bali, having been there for my honeymoon. There are so many beautiful temples and locations, yet stuck to the beach for most of this video. I can't tell if this is a promo for your services, for Bali, for a travel company or Viagra. You might consider more titles to be clear with your message.
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Old May 5th, 2009, 02:36 AM   #7
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Hi Oren Arieli,

Thanks for your good advices. I'll consider it.

Please wait for my another video clip and please don't be hesitate to give a suggest for us

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