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my new SDE l need feedback · February 26th, 2010, 08:07 AM

comments and suggestions are much appreciated

Jawad Mir · February 26th, 2010, 08:58 AM

First, it being your first SDE, great work.

Now here are little tips not more so criticism.

The music you chose was a good choice but it didn't really seem to fit at all until the father finished his saying. I also think the opening shot was not a good selection for opening and you gave away too much.

What I mean to say the music you selected had an element of tease which you used extremely well later with the dress shots, shoes, tight close ups but if you had used that technique in the beginning, it would have been more exciting :)

Other than that, a fine job

Noel Bentulan · February 26th, 2010, 09:25 AM

hi jawad.

thanks for the comment and thanks for spending time on my vid.
i learned a lot on what you said..
i just watched your video on your site.. KUDOS.

Susanto Widjaja · February 26th, 2010, 06:00 PM

Hey Noel,

I well done on your SDE!

I have to agree with Jawad about the song. It doesnt fit your video that is full of energy and modern.

I think if you use different song, the result will be completely different.

also, please clean your lense!! :P

Santo

Noel Bentulan · February 27th, 2010, 06:15 AM

hey santo,

the lense..too bad.. i just saw it when i am editing.
thank you so much.
i saw your weddin video at MAYAD STUDIOS BLOG.
it was a kick ass!!...
best wishes.

February 26th, 2010, 08:58 AM	#2
Jawad Mir Major Player Join Date: May 2008 Location: Canada Posts: 371	First, it being your first SDE, great work. Now here are little tips not more so criticism. The music you chose was a good choice but it didn't really seem to fit at all until the father finished his saying. I also think the opening shot was not a good selection for opening and you gave away too much. What I mean to say the music you selected had an element of tease which you used extremely well later with the dress shots, shoes, tight close ups but if you had used that technique in the beginning, it would have been more exciting :) Other than that, a fine job __________________ Jawad Mir / Cinematographer . Filmmaker Film Style Weddings http://www.filmstyleweddings.com Jawad Mir http://www.jawadmir.com

February 26th, 2010, 09:25 AM	#3
Noel Bentulan New Boot Join Date: Feb 2010 Location: Philippines Posts: 11	thanks hi jawad. thanks for the comment and thanks for spending time on my vid. i learned a lot on what you said.. i just watched your video on your site.. KUDOS. Last edited by Noel Bentulan; February 26th, 2010 at 09:23 AM. Reason: ss

February 26th, 2010, 06:00 PM	#4
Susanto Widjaja Major Player Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Sydney, Australia Posts: 622	Hey Noel, I well done on your SDE! I have to agree with Jawad about the song. It doesnt fit your video that is full of energy and modern. I think if you use different song, the result will be completely different. also, please clean your lense!! :P Santo __________________ If a picture is worth a thousand words, what about motion picture? website: www.papercranes.com.au \| blog: www.weddingvideosydney.net

February 27th, 2010, 06:15 AM	#5
Noel Bentulan New Boot Join Date: Feb 2010 Location: Philippines Posts: 11	thanks hey santo, the lense..too bad.. i just saw it when i am editing. thank you so much. i saw your weddin video at MAYAD STUDIOS BLOG. it was a kick ass!!... best wishes.