Second Wedding Trailer - Advice & Feedback appreciated
 

Hi Guys,

Here's an example of my second wedding which I shot recently. The main difference from the first, is my ability to get in close, especially during dance scenes, conveying a little bit more emotion, which was missing in the first attempt. I had no choice but to go out and purchase the 70 - 20 /2.8, altho Santa will not be stopping my our house this xmas after it.

One of the readers spoke low, and I found I probably increased the gain too much in this clip. I'm also having difficulty in keeping focus in some places.

There's a few shaky shots on the monopod, which i'm still trying to master, and of course this was my first attempt with Apply color, and grading.

Any other feedback would be appreciated.