Another edit for review
 

Hi, apololgise for putting up another edit directly after my last. Just finished this rough edit for a montage, but will go back to it another time as I concentrate better after a break!

Any thoughts,comments appreciated.
Thank you again.

http://www.derienzo-videoproductions...ex-doreene.wmv

Hi John,

Nicely done.. My only criticiscm at all (minor)It seems just a tad bit long, but I liked it. nice editing and camera movements.. Now if only those swans would have cooperated and took their heads out of the water !!!

Mike M.

Hi Mike,

Thank you for your comments and positive critique! yes looks a bit long just towards the end, always good to go back and re-edit! I think I did not pay the swans enough, so they mis behaved!!!

cheers.