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June 22nd, 2008, 04:32 AM
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Another edit for review
Hi, apololgise for putting up another edit directly after my last. Just finished this rough edit for a montage, but will go back to it another time as I concentrate better after a break!
Any thoughts,comments appreciated. Thank you again. http://www.derienzo-videoproductions...ex-doreene.wmv |
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June 22nd, 2008, 06:00 AM
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Hi John,
Nicely done.. My only criticiscm at all (minor)It seems just a tad bit long, but I liked it. nice editing and camera movements.. Now if only those swans would have cooperated and took their heads out of the water !!! Mike M. |
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June 22nd, 2008, 12:13 PM
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Hi Mike,
Thank you for your comments and positive critique! yes looks a bit long just towards the end, always good to go back and re-edit! I think I did not pay the swans enough, so they mis behaved!!! cheers. |
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