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John De Rienzo · August 21st, 2008, 12:51 PM

Hi,

Put this together this morning in about an hour so may need to review again.

Comments appreciated.

http://www.derienzo-videoproductions...on-trailer.wmv

Thank you.

Travis Cossel · August 21st, 2008, 12:57 PM

That's pretty good for only an hour of editing. Some of the cuts were a bit off of the beat, unless that's a compression issue. Also, many of the clips had overexposure issues that you might want to fix if possible.

John De Rienzo · August 21st, 2008, 01:09 PM

Hi Travis,

Thank you for your comments. I think the circular grad. filter is causing the overexposure, but not too concerned about this as quite like the blowout.

As for cutting to the beat....i've done my best within the time, extremely hard with a track like this even when viewing the audio track.

Then again, it could be compression!

Thank you.

Oleg Kalyan · August 21st, 2008, 01:56 PM

John, you did a nice edit,

imho, heroic music and the style of editing you've chosen, is traditionally used in
action films, (first one that comes in mind is "The Rock" )

I am not sure that this mood, tempo, dramatism conveys, symbolizes a wedding in general and particular wedding you've presented here,
Bride's smile is beautiful and innocent, there is no drama, harm of offense on the horizon,
no military actions, no war, no crimes and no victims, no admiration for courage,
thus no heroes, no lionhearts, no warriors, no knights.
Sorry about me getting in dictionary to describe what I feel hearing that kind of music, off course, if the couple loves the soundtrack presented, fine,

In any case you did a great work editing promo,

Cheers!

David Kovalev · August 21st, 2008, 02:15 PM

I actually loved it. I tried not to blink not to miss anything. I'd change the begining text to something more elegant and smaller and get rid of the lens flare in the begining. But i really like the attention you had to detail and the ending seemed so peaceful with the bird...

good teaser... good job. What kind of software do you use to make that "glowing" effect during fast motion? It looks really cool.

John De Rienzo · August 21st, 2008, 04:03 PM

Thank you for all your positive comments.

Always learning and trying out different approaches!

Cheers!

August 21st, 2008, 12:51 PM	#1
John De Rienzo Major Player Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: London Posts: 313	Trailer Hi, Put this together this morning in about an hour so may need to review again. Comments appreciated. http://www.derienzo-videoproductions...on-trailer.wmv Thank you.

August 21st, 2008, 12:57 PM	#2
Travis Cossel Inner Circle Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Miami, FL Posts: 2,933	That's pretty good for only an hour of editing. Some of the cuts were a bit off of the beat, unless that's a compression issue. Also, many of the clips had overexposure issues that you might want to fix if possible. __________________ Black Label Films www.blacklabelweddingfilms.com

August 21st, 2008, 01:09 PM	#3
John De Rienzo Major Player Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: London Posts: 313	Hi Travis, Thank you for your comments. I think the circular grad. filter is causing the overexposure, but not too concerned about this as quite like the blowout. As for cutting to the beat....i've done my best within the time, extremely hard with a track like this even when viewing the audio track. Then again, it could be compression! Thank you.

August 21st, 2008, 01:56 PM	#4
Oleg Kalyan Major Player Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: MOSCOW Posts: 860	John, you did a nice edit, imho, heroic music and the style of editing you've chosen, is traditionally used in action films, (first one that comes in mind is "The Rock" ) I am not sure that this mood, tempo, dramatism conveys, symbolizes a wedding in general and particular wedding you've presented here, Bride's smile is beautiful and innocent, there is no drama, harm of offense on the horizon, no military actions, no war, no crimes and no victims, no admiration for courage, thus no heroes, no lionhearts, no warriors, no knights. Sorry about me getting in dictionary to describe what I feel hearing that kind of music, off course, if the couple loves the soundtrack presented, fine, In any case you did a great work editing promo, Cheers!

August 21st, 2008, 02:15 PM	#5
David Kovalev Regular Crew Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: North Port, FL Posts: 96	I actually loved it. I tried not to blink not to miss anything. I'd change the begining text to something more elegant and smaller and get rid of the lens flare in the begining. But i really like the attention you had to detail and the ending seemed so peaceful with the bird... good teaser... good job. What kind of software do you use to make that "glowing" effect during fast motion? It looks really cool.

August 21st, 2008, 04:03 PM	#6
John De Rienzo Major Player Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: London Posts: 313	Thank you for all your positive comments. Always learning and trying out different approaches! Cheers!