Here is a short some friends and I did for the Sketchies 2 contest on YouTube.
Nothing fancy, I'm aware it looks very blue. I didn't do much in post with it, but just looking for feedback. Here it is...

http://youtube.com/watch?v=sDonj2FFd6E

Any criticism is appreciated!

Yeah, it was a little blue, and the shots were a little tight, but it made me laugh. I really wasn't sure what was going on, but it made me laugh.

yes,
it was pretty random, but I'm glad you laughed!b