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comments and suggestions are much appreciated

First, it being your first SDE, great work.

Now here are little tips not more so criticism.

The music you chose was a good choice but it didn't really seem to fit at all until the father finished his saying. I also think the opening shot was not a good selection for opening and you gave away too much.

What I mean to say the music you selected had an element of tease which you used extremely well later with the dress shots, shoes, tight close ups but if you had used that technique in the beginning, it would have been more exciting :)

Other than that, a fine job

hi jawad.

thanks for the comment and thanks for spending time on my vid.
i learned a lot on what you said..
i just watched your video on your site.. KUDOS.

Hey Noel,

I well done on your SDE!

I have to agree with Jawad about the song. It doesnt fit your video that is full of energy and modern.

I think if you use different song, the result will be completely different.

also, please clean your lense!! :P

Santo

hey santo,

the lense..too bad.. i just saw it when i am editing.
thank you so much.
i saw your weddin video at MAYAD STUDIOS BLOG.
it was a kick ass!!...
best wishes.