Hey guys,

This is a short promo I shot and edited last year. Was hoping to get some feedback/constructive criticism :)

Vibram Promo - YouTube

Notes: White balance is off in places, plus a bit of shakey cam. I've learnt a lot since then.

Hi Jody,

I think you could use a bit of fill lighting on the faces of the interviewees', they would look better with a bit of light in their eyes. With Paul, I think it would have been good to have him sitting in the shade, even looking casual under an umbrella maybe :) or put a hat on him then use fill lighting from a disc down low. He has deep set eyes which tend to disappear if not lit correctly. He looked strained by the sun.

I think your shot at either 1:54 or 1:59 would look really good in slo mo, great for your product.

Music suited the beginning but IMO got a bit wearing by the end.

Otherwise well done.

Al