hello everyone, i've been shooting video for about 9 months now and i thought i would post a clip of my first work.i wanted to go to school for film and directing but due to lack of money i had to setle on teaching myself. i worked long hrs. and saved up just enough to buy myself a dvx 100,final cut pro 5,and a mac.and read alot of books.so here you have it.please be as critical as you can i'm still learning. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OqGnkcBlP5E

that was good. It even looked good on youtube too!!

thank you bob for the encouragement hoping i can soon get one of the high def cameras to shoot my next film on.

Nice, let us know when it's available.

I thought some shots looked a bit video-ish but it seemed to work for your story, like it was a documentary shot on the moment.
But your audio was very good.

That looks great Christian ! What HD camera are you considering for your next project ?

Christian:

For being self-taught, you are well on your way to becoming quite the filmmaker. Acting and camera work looked danmed good on that 1:45 teaser. Pittsburgh is most definitely "in da house!"

Good job!

Christian, Looks good the advice I have for you is to watch a lot of other trailers, and "Borrow" a lot of the things you see. It will help you with pacing and getting your story across in a short period of time. Keep up the good work. I liked what I saw.

Mark

Nicely done. I wish I had feinds that could act. (well other than like idiots when a camera gets turned on)

It looks great to me! Your audio is really really good. What did you use to record it? Keep up the hard work!

thanks again everyone for the feedback.for my sound i used an me66.althogh for my next project i would like to use something a little bit better.