DV Info Net - Show Your Work https://www.dvinfo.net/forum/ en Sun, 28 Jun 2026 06:49:04 GMT vBulletin 60 https://www.dvinfo.net/forum/images/misc/rss.jpg DV Info Net - Show Your Work https://www.dvinfo.net/forum/ National TV Spot Constructive Criticism https://www.dvinfo.net/forum/show-your-work/539753-national-tv-spot-constructive-criticism.html Wed, 10 Jun 2026 16:47:00 GMT I am currently working on a national TV spot for my university to be played during our athletic games this upcoming school year. They will likely also use this when they need a quick commercial to be used on pages on the website or any digital marketing that they plan to use.

While it's not finished (I still need to fix sound effects, add in the final voice over artist and license the music), the commercial has been completely shot and wrapped filming. I could go back in and shoot more scenes if it feels necessary.

Knowing all of that, I would love some feedback on what you think about it.

- What works?
- What doesn't work?
- Does the story of this video make sense?

Anything you can provide would be helpful! I don't make these types of videos often and it's the first proper TV commercial that I have ever made that I actually went out and shot every single frame for the intent of it being a TV spot.

Thanks for any feedback you are willing to provide.

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