Feedback on Music Video
 

Hey everyone, since I value everyone's opinions on this forum, thought I see if anyone would offer their feedback on this music video I made. It's fairly simple, I only have a 1 chip camera, and only have Pinnacle Studio 8.5 for my software. I think it came out OK for my first attempt. This file is about 10.5 MB formated for WMP.

Thanks for any constructive criticism, or just to tell me it sucks (that would be OK too)

Jeff Troiano

http://www.fransmantra.com/video/Timing%27s%20Everything.wmv

80's Hairband flashback!! Arrrgh!!!

Just kidding :) I thought it was shot well, and lit nicely. The only thing that became noticeable to me, was some obvious cuts that looked a few frames off in continuity. The first takes place around 31 seconds in. I'm not sure how you shot it/ edited it, but the are some visually noticeable jumps.