My latest music video, take a look and comment please
 

Right-click the link and select 'Save target as...'

http://www.havefunvisuals.com/look.avi

Watch and tell me what you think, please!

Finish all the stuff that's not done. There's no point in critiquing half-finished work.

I get a 404 error and I can't read Russian.

Ivan, if you have a specific challenge or obstacle in making your video and can articulate it in the format of a question, that might yield more productive advice than simply asking people to download a 35MB file and take the time to watch it and give a critique.

The boy who cried wolf springs to mind . The way you titled the thread I thought your intel chip was about to go critical and start melting through your computer or somethin'

Andy.

I realized it the minute I've posted it
 

I realized it the minute I've posted it, but I have no clue how to rename the threat. I would gladly delete it. That was a panic strike.

on what format did u use?

viglidid horosho.

miniDV, it's a Sony vx2100e

privet

picture looks really deep, i though it was film :)

Bands aint paying for film, not yet at least)

its all bout the lighting ppl.....see...he used a sony vx to get awesome images form them...granted clips always look better on the pc, but still....it was pretty good.

I assume you liked it, thanks))
Is there anything on the video? Likes/dislikes?

yah ...i like the start..that was pretty good

wich lenses did you use with the sony?

Canon FD 50mm 1.4, Canon FD 17mm 4.0, I think thats it

could you please give any links/pictures of these lenses, couldn't find any....

There you go
 

http://www.mir.com.my/rb/photography...enses/17mm.htm

http://www.mir.com.my/rb/photography...enses/50mm.htm

thanks for links

but how did u attached them to the camera? Did u use selfmade adapter?

yes I have used a rented adapter

Well done, Ivan!

Pros
Image quality is superb!
Format - wide enough - great!
Cuts from dark shots to light - excellent! (twice, that's just enough)
Varying the shots - (long shots to close ups) - great!
The artist in the centre - centre stage - perfect!

Cons
Where is the story, and what is the story?
Overall impression - boring. Not dynamic enough (you can use sped-up sequences, yet they may or may not work).
Too much flow - the focus never stops - something/someone can be shown a bit longer, for instance.
The sexy parts do not look pretty, they are somewhere in the middle (may be they are too fast and can go in slow motion in contrast).

Thanks sir, thats some good points