Step by Step | passing time
 

I'd like to share a short film about beauty of everyday life, falling leaves, and passing time

Location: Bory Tucholskie (Poland) Directed: mojebory
Edited: mojebory
Shot: mojebory
Color grading: mojebory
facebook.com/borytucholskie
Music: Sigur Rós

Re: Step by Step | passing time
 

Mariusz,

There was some excellent framing, colour and angles in that film, but I have to say I really struggled with the continuity. To me, it just didn't flow in its present state. Its almost as if its a series of stills tied together to make a film. I couldn't work out how it tied in with passing time.

On the flip side, I loved some of the framing and colour.

Al

Re: Step by Step | passing time
 

Hi Alan,

Thanks for your feedback... I did as I could... maybe next time ;)
Best wishes from Poland

Re: Step by Step | passing time
 

I think the framing and colors are pretty good. :)
I think the story could be better told if some of the footages are rearranged to improve the continuity of the video.

Re: Step by Step | passing time
 

Thank you for your feedback,

Maybe you didn't notice that almost every part of this film is an analogy... or maybe I did something wrong ;)

Greetings from Poland

Re: Step by Step | passing time
 

Mariusz

Great work. One or the most pleasing pieces I have watched of late. Nice clear narrative, poetic, evocative; I enjoyed every bit of it. Just gorgeous. Congratulations.

Thanks so much for sharing.

Greetings to you from New Zealand.

John

Re: Step by Step | passing time
 

Hi John,

thank you so much for watching ;)

Greetings from Poland