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David Evans June 6th, 2019 07:19 AM

Short film for your critique
 
Hey guys,

Just finished a new short film that I would like to show you. Very important theme in this story and we tried to be as sober as possible. It's a bit stylized and oppressive but I think in the end it leaves you with a positive feeling that it's both hopeful and complex. Hope you enjoy it.


Pass: insidefilmscreener

Let me know what you think.

Donald McPherson June 6th, 2019 10:20 AM

Re: Short film for your critique
 
I think you need to check your password.

David Evans June 6th, 2019 12:14 PM

Re: Short film for your critique
 
Right you are Donald. Just corrected in the original post.

David Evans June 8th, 2019 06:29 AM

Re: Short film for your critique
 
Is the password working now?

Bob Safay June 9th, 2019 10:27 AM

Re: Short film for your critique
 
It's not working

David Evans June 9th, 2019 12:08 PM

Re: Short film for your critique
 
That's weird... Just double checked. Password is insidefilmscreener. Anyone else having problems viewing the video?

Cary Knoop June 9th, 2019 12:48 PM

Re: Short film for your critique
 
Can't see it, just provide a direct link to Vimeo.

David Evans June 9th, 2019 01:04 PM

Re: Short film for your critique
 
Here it is

vimeo.com/340405576

David Evans June 13th, 2019 07:51 AM

Re: Short film for your critique
 
Hey guys, just wondering if anyone was able to load the video.

Thanks

Dave Baker June 13th, 2019 08:59 AM

Re: Short film for your critique
 
The password works for me but the link doesn't.

David Evans June 29th, 2019 02:30 AM

Re: Short film for your critique
 
Trailer is out :


Steven Digges July 18th, 2019 11:16 AM

Re: Short film for your critique
 
Hey David,

I was able to see the whole thing. I like the shooting, well done for this type of flic. I would be critical of the audio mix though. It is over the top. There are times when the male actor is clearly not breathing heavy. But it seems to me you added loud heavy breathing in post for the effect. To me, it is so overpowering and out of place it sounds like a third person is in the room watching them.

Well done short. I hope it works for you.

Kind Regards,

Steve

David Evans July 24th, 2019 12:26 AM

Re: Short film for your critique
 
Hey Steven, thanks for watching. Yeah, I am still not happy with some bits of the heavy breathing. If you have the time, could you point out for the parts that distracted you the most?

Thanks!


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