Opinions on my movie intro
 

Hey, im making a movie called SWAT, and i made the intro, its only the first like 30 seconds, but i want to some opinions on it. i thinkits pritty cool so far. of you want to see it just give me your email and ill send it to you. thanks -Nick

Why not put up a link to it?

Where can i post it?

just post the web address.

ie: "http://www.yoururl.com"

I dont understand what you mean.

I thought you had it on the web somewhere, but reading your first post again I see you want to send it through email as an attachment? How big is the file?

you could always throw it up on youtube.com

k will do, its proccessing right now

http://communityvideo.aol.com/Playba...ndex=1&page=10

link to my movie intro. please watch it and give me sum input. thanks

you didnt send the right link - you need the non abbreviated link

http://communityvideo.aol.com/Playba...ndex=0&page=10

is this you?

wups try it now:

http://communityvideo.aol.com/Playba...ndex=1&page=10

yea thats it

how do you get it non abbreviated

Great Job overall! Here's what I think....

Good
Music is catchy
Police lights in the frame is great
Smoke effect is awesome!

Bad
The letters SWAT look kinda cheesy maybe its the way they come in and out to me...
It seems too long over all just having the music going, I'm assuming that you are planning to add the credits in the space as the song is going, or some text to set the scene like the date ect.

I feel you have a great start to the intro and I am looking foward to the final product! SWAT, the title makes the movie seem like it's going to be an action packed, enjoyable film!

James