UC24- Plan B- Mike Sims
 

Everyone longs to go home. (I’m still enjoying this exercise of summarizing the story in one short sentence.) The title obviously comes from our discussion on the Wonders and Woes thread. It was actually more like Plan E (and I’m really glad to avoid the sharks!) but Plan B fits better with the concept and has a sharper hook. I’ve tried to contrast the first part (the city) and the second part (the zoo) by, in the former, using long clips with moving camera and a heavy grade intended to convey a stark gritty image and, in the latter, shorter cuts with static camera and a lighter more “natural” grade. Unfortunately for me, the grading in the city didn’t hold up to the Vimeo Flash compression; I think it looks too muddy. (I will try to put another version up on my website later this week and link you here so you can see more what I had in mind.) Lesson learned- in future I will first check any heavy grade with the compression to be used. The compression also had some other undesired effects. In the original you really can see the reflection in the glass of the man taking photos of the monkeys with his cell phone and trying to get his sleeping baby in the foreground. No sight of the reflection in the final. Several shots came out looking very soft focus which originally weren’t (mostly clips with very high contrast like lighted displays and dark hallways or with patches of bright sunlight). The sequence with the pets was intended to bridge the first and second parts and actually has the same grade as the first part at a much reduced level. It was shifted somewhat to the blue- I’m not sure why it came out so yellow. That whole sequence needs to be re-edited and tightened up quite a bit. I just didn’t have time.

The bird that is extinct in the wild is the Guam Kingfisher. The endangered crane is the national bird of Uganda (Just for you, Simon!).

Another important function of zoos that I did not mention is affording frustrated wildlife videographers which are stuck in the city an opportunity to try and “keep their eye in”. Obviously some zoos are much more photographer-friendly than others. I’m fortunate to live near one that is quite accommodating. There are two other major zoos nearby. One is somewhat ambivalent about photographers. Cameras are allowed but no tripods are to be used inside buildings. No one ever stops you from doing so and it happens all the time. The other is quite hostile. No cameras allowed. Anyone seen taking photos-even with a cell phone- is asked to leave. Ouch!

Any questions, comments, criticisms and, especially, suggestions for improvement are requested and, as always, appreciated. Thank-you!

Re: UC24- Plan B- Mike Sims
 

Haha, Mike! Yup, those Crowned Cranes are indeed the national bird of Uganda, as seen in the centre of the flag. Those guys are far from home. We visited this location back in the winning entry of Zoo in a Dewdrop, so you're off to a good start!

Its interesting for me to see so many African animals in that film. That was a Wild Dog at 1.45; they are very endangered and in fact I have never seen one in all my years in Africa (bearing in mind I actually used to work as a ranger in various National Parks!). I guess that was an Okapi at 2.0; also an animal I have never seen (though essentially no one has ever really casually seen one in the wild!). They are native to the Congo, though recently there was evidence of Okapi living in the Virungas National park, which is contiguous with forests in Uganda; so its likely they must have lived here in the past.

As you say the grade didn't work out so good in the beginning (seemed a bit dark), and perhaps there were some audio level discrepancies at one point, but you got the message across nicely.

Re: UC24- Plan B- Mike Sims
 

Mike, I really liked that film, it has a strong message!
I have a hard time taking a stand about showing captive wild animal. I do it in my exhibition (fish and shrimps), and if the zoo got a conservation program and really working with this, that it feels a bit better… But I every time get a stomach ache…

Re: UC24- Plan B- Mike Sims
 

Hi Mike,

I hear you about plan B... or E. Had the same thing myself this round.

I learned something new from watching your film, and thank you for that.
A great story, and the visuals to back it up. Good to see you experiment with filming and grading styles to back up the story.

Well done!

Re: UC24- Plan B- Mike Sims
 

Mike,
I agree with you. The compression recommended for Vimeo upload dulls the production big time.
The only good thing to say is that it's better than YouTube. Have you experimented with other means of displaying material with less compression?

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I always look forward to seeing what Mike Sims is going to put up. So this is the first one I watched. It started out like a crime movie, dark and gritty. Something bad was going down in the dirty city. Of particular note was the body language of the people in the zoo, relaxed, at ease though alert at the same time, fully observing their surroundings. Like they are in an oasis in the middle of a desert. Production wise I didn't notice that it was too dark in the beginning until I saw your quote. It seemed like it was planned that way. The best shots I thought were at 1:34, and 2:28. The audio background with the families talking among themselves was excellent as a counterpoint.

Re: UC24- Plan B- Mike Sims
 

Mike,

When the movie first started I was preparing myself for a gritty, underworld, city feel. I love the juxtaposition of the friendly zoo against the grainy city.

Favorite shot was at 2:58 with the family of deer(?)

What type of audio equipment did you use? I think it was on-camera audio for the zoo scene, but I was wondering about the voiceover.

Loved seeing so many varieties of the zoo animals! Makes me want to head up to the Bronx!

Toni

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Mike,

Thanks very much for your film - shows a lot of thought into getting the story across, and showing the human species in its own environment.

Re: UC24- Plan B- Mike Sims
 

Thanks, Simon. Most of the animals I showed are African. I did that on purpose to go along with the “longing to go home”. I certainly feel a longing regularly to “return” to a place I’ve never (yet) been. The San Antonio Zoo for many years specialized in it’s African collection, especially ungulates. About 60% of the exhibits are currently under renovation and most of the antelope are off visiting other zoos. I wasn’t able to match species for the last cross-fade and had to settle for somewhat the same horn structure. The Wild Dogs are currently raising a litter. The zoo has several Okapi (seven I think). They are in three exhibits and the one I showed wasn’t really supposed to be filling for a groundskeeper and pruning that tree.

Re: UC24- Plan B- Mike Sims
 

Markus- Sorry about the stomach ache!-but I’m pleased you liked the video. I’ve worked with many captive animals in the past and I guess you get used to it. I very much prefer, though, recording natural behaviour of wild animals in their native habitat.

Re: UC24- Plan B- Mike Sims
 

Thanks, Trond. As you say, much of what you saw is still very much an experiment in progress.

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Steve- I shouldn’t have blamed so much the compression! I should rather have blamed my own lack of time to optimize it. Many people get excellent results with Vimeo (much evidence here this round!). I wish they would publish their final requirements and let us do the Flash encoding. I don’t like having two levels of compression; one to mp4 which I can somewhat control and again to Flash over which I have no control. The highest quality method I’ve found is to make a nice looking mp4 and host it yourself. My own website is sadly neglected (working on it) but I have an excellent service provider (It’s $5 a month for unlimited storage and unlimited bandwidth. I can’t mention the name here but if anyone is interested PM me. By the way, Per Johan recently remade his website and if any of you haven’t seen it yet it’s worth a look. Lookin’ good P.J.)

Re: UC24- Plan B- Mike Sims
 

Thank-you Bill. That’s the reaction I was hoping for. I like the shot of the two little ones at the fence too. I came around a corner, saw it, and scrambled to set up and get the shot before it changed. Just as I stopped recording Mom called them away.

Re: UC24- Plan B- Mike Sims
 

Thank-you, Toni. The spotted ones were indeed Axis deer from India. The big guy was a male Greater Kudu from Africa. We have a lot of exotics wandering around Texas (even in the cities now but that’s another story…). Some of the Indian antelope now have larger populations in Texas than in India.

Audio is something I suspect we could all learn a great deal about from you. This video was shot on a Canon T2i-550D (28 f1.8 and 100-400L lenses) and as you surmised, the zoo audio was recorded in camera. Several times I set up and recorded long takes for the audio. None of it was originally tied to the clips you saw. The other ambient sound was recorded on a Zoom H1 with built in microphones (for example the car) or a parabolic mic (the birds which is actually four layers- there is a thread in the Audio sub forum about the mic if you are interested in details). For the first time I used a 60 cycle hum as an ambient bed (you know- that thing we usually try really hard NOT to record!) under the houseplants and pets. It is very noticeable without but as an ambient the hum seems to blend right into the 60Hz symphony we North Americans live our lives in. (I think that is one reason why spending time in wilderness is so compelling. The lack of the hum is so noticeable and refreshing.) I wonder if it is more noticeable in those clips by European ears used to living in a 50Hz cloud? The voice-over is recorded with a MXL USB.008 Mic to a laptop using Audacity as an uncompressed WAV. It was then transferred to my editing computer and EQ applied with a classic V in Adobe Soundbooth. With more time I would have used a compressor, spent a lot more time on mixdown and added some Foley (the leaves sound while the Okapi was browsing is just serendipity.)

Re: UC24- Plan B- Mike Sims
 

Thanks Paul, that’s nice of you to say. This was rather somewhat of a rush because I came up with the idea so late in the game. Like a couple of my earlier entries the idea finally came to me while I was asleep and dreaming.

Re: UC24- Plan B- Mike Sims
 

Mike,

I really like the opening, I had no problem with the way the cityscape was graded. The only footage I found hard to see, very dark on my monitor, were the pets/companion animals.

Like you, I have mixed feelings about zoos and captive animals. For my thesis I was forced into using captive along with wild monkeys in studying ecology of African monkeys. At the time I resisted, but since the monkeys I used were kept at the university there, and otherwise would have been eaten, I reluctantly came to accept the value in certain situations, where they could be helpful in learning more about how to conserve them. Zoos these days have complex missions, including conserving species that would otherwise become extinct.

It was really interesting to see people at the zoo. I helped act as an advisor for a woman getting her doctorate on wildlife sound recording, and she ended up focusing on zoo visitors rather than wildlife. It was an interesting twist, showing a lot about how people interact with their links to nature.

I hope someday you manage to go home!


Ruth

Re: UC24- Plan B- Mike Sims
 

You have a good and strong story to tell. I like your style with small drips of humor.
The title and the running rabbit and cat as examples.
It is always interesting to see your contributions. Plan-B is no means a B-film.

Re: UC24- Plan B- Mike Sims
 

I like your video very much Mike.
I think you also touch a relevant question about whether to keep wild animals in captivity.
On the one hand, I wish that the wild animals can live in freedom;
on the other hand I see that zoos can have their place and I’m thinking of people with disabilities.
I work for people with disabilities and the opportunity to meet animals in zoos or other places can do wonders for them.
Nothing much to complain about your video, just two tip from me and I hope you don’t mind.
Perhaps the watermark is too big and maybe not through the whole video? Now and then I think it is in the way of the objects in your video.
My second comment is about the pets in the sofa. A brighter color on the blanket would have given you a better contrast between pets and sofa.
Colors and editing is just fine, and I think the same about the sound tracks.
Bout your VO, background sound and music suits the video. Great story that got me involved from the first second, clever done.

Best wishes from Norway.

Re: UC24- Plan B- Mike Sims
 

Thank-you, Ruth. I almost made it there once but had to regretfully decline the job offer. One always wonders about roads not taken…

Re: UC24- Plan B- Mike Sims
 

Thank-you Finn-Erik, I am pleased that you enjoyed this one.

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Thanks Geir Inge. I appreciate your insight and agree with your assessment. By the way, the pets are all rescues. The rabbit arrived on my doorstep with a note which said “My name is Toby. Please take care of me.” The cat was a feral cat that was killing birds at my feeder until I persuaded her of the error of her ways. She is now reformed. I was returning from filming a kingfisher nest and found that someone had dumped a litter of puppies at the riverside. When I opened my car door two climbed in and came home with me (I later caught and found homes for the rest). Their names are Vixen and Sirius. Cat’s true name is known only to herself…

Re: UC24- Plan B- Mike Sims
 

Mike,

As always, you throw something intersting out there for us to view and in this case ponder!! I think this is a good one for a 30 minute documentary!! you might consider that!! Your take on the theme is quite solid in my mind (maybe I should not say it like that, eh).
I loved the bunny and the cat sceene!! At 3:00 was the doe___?? with fawns which was really superb.

Nice job on the voice over.

I very much enjoyed the film!!

Re: UC24- Plan B- Mike Sims
 

Thanks, Dale. The scene with the pets didn’t turn out quite like I had planned it. Everyone cooperated until the record button was pushed and then they all proceeded to remind me that they have minds of their own…
What was it W.C. Fields said about never working with children or animals?