Vidiar, I loaded your short from your iweb .Mac site, I like the other short films on there and the artwork.
Video and stills so much better when shown on a black background.
Stunning colour loved all of it, those under water shots brilliant.

I‘ve had some trouble loading some of the videos,

Hi Vidar

Hey...some great crisp, colourful and interesting shots in this both underwater and topside! It was a great look at the diversity to be found in a shallow shoreline.

The waves soundtrack seemed not to change throughout. I think you should have faded it down with depth or just changed it in some way. I also feel the shots for me didn't build together to form an overall structure. Although as a whole your piece was packaged nicely between the start and ending with the great transition between the 2 worlds.

Great stuff :)
Mat

The underwater footage was especially spectacular, but I liked the flow of the whole film.

Ruth

D.J Zupancic,
I have only for testing tryed yore tips,used nature-audio
on the underwater clip.Tanks for your tips.
Link to corekted film:

http://web.mac.com/vidarjohannesveda.../Hellesoy.html
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V.Vedaa.