I would suggest more transitions. Cross dissolve is fine, or any other depending on the mood and pace. Also the fade-in, fade-out takes a little bit too long.

I liked it. I agree about changing scenes to the beat of the music. It was a little shaky, but Brian's criticism was very much exaggerated.

Just an update.

I appreciate the feedback.

I'm currently re-cutting it to the beats and making some small changes to the shot order and shot selection. Thanks again.

Ben