April 18th, 2009, 01:47 AM
Short wedding teaser from last weekends wedding:
Ali & Dave teaser (http://www.barwickmultimedia.com.au/blog/?p=91)
As always, comments and feedback welcome!
April 18th, 2009, 05:59 AM
Not sure this teaser is convincing me, seems a little understated, and does not really draw me in to want to watch the "movie". I think the opening shot needs to have impact and I don't really think the flower does that. If you are set on that shot, maybe try an audio overlay to beef it up a bit?
The audio of the groom seemed a bit short, I was expecting to hear perhaps a little more.
I think it would have been better closing on the walking shot, composition seemed a little better and possibly may match the drawn out lyric at the end if you went from a normal to slowmo for the "goodbye".
Anyway, that would be my thoughts on it, which may or may not be shared by our peers, perhaps someone else could offer some feedback for us aussies!!! :)
April 20th, 2009, 12:07 PM
I thought it was very nicely done.
April 20th, 2009, 02:11 PM
Very understated and clean- I like it!
April 20th, 2009, 02:17 PM
It was subtle and tastefully done with a good variety of beauty shots. I also would like to hear more from the wedding...but I can understand the need to keep it brief and allow it to 'fit' within the music. Always a challenge. So long as the bride and groom are happy, our opinions are just background noise.
April 20th, 2009, 11:45 PM
I like it, matches the music well. Like mentioned above a very clean edit which makes it enjoyable to watch.
April 21st, 2009, 11:17 PM
Thanks for the feedback guys - appreciate you taking the time to view and comment.
I see the point regarding wanting to hear more audio but what I'm trying to do with these is present them to the couple as true 'teasers' - quite short and just limited pieces of vision and audio.
April 21st, 2009, 11:25 PM
Gotta love the car shot! she's one funky bride afterall eh?
Keep up the good work.