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Quick wedding teaser · April 18th, 2009, 01:47 AM

Short wedding teaser from last weekends wedding:

Ali & Dave teaser

As always, comments and feedback welcome!

Matt

Darren Smith · April 18th, 2009, 05:59 AM

Hi Matt

Not sure this teaser is convincing me, seems a little understated, and does not really draw me in to want to watch the "movie". I think the opening shot needs to have impact and I don't really think the flower does that. If you are set on that shot, maybe try an audio overlay to beef it up a bit?

The audio of the groom seemed a bit short, I was expecting to hear perhaps a little more.

I think it would have been better closing on the walking shot, composition seemed a little better and possibly may match the drawn out lyric at the end if you went from a normal to slowmo for the "goodbye".

Anyway, that would be my thoughts on it, which may or may not be shared by our peers, perhaps someone else could offer some feedback for us aussies!!! :)

Cheers
Darren

Dylan Tobias · April 20th, 2009, 12:07 PM

I thought it was very nicely done.

Glen Elliott · April 20th, 2009, 02:11 PM

Very understated and clean- I like it!

Oren Arieli · April 20th, 2009, 02:17 PM

It was subtle and tastefully done with a good variety of beauty shots. I also would like to hear more from the wedding...but I can understand the need to keep it brief and allow it to 'fit' within the music. Always a challenge. So long as the bride and groom are happy, our opinions are just background noise.

Denny Kyser · April 20th, 2009, 11:45 PM

I like it, matches the music well. Like mentioned above a very clean edit which makes it enjoyable to watch.

Matt Barwick · April 21st, 2009, 11:17 PM

Thanks for the feedback guys - appreciate you taking the time to view and comment.

I see the point regarding wanting to hear more audio but what I'm trying to do with these is present them to the couple as true 'teasers' - quite short and just limited pieces of vision and audio.

Thanks again.

Cheers,

Matt.

Susanto Widjaja · April 21st, 2009, 11:25 PM

Well done!

Gotta love the car shot! she's one funky bride afterall eh?

Keep up the good work.

Santo

April 20th, 2009, 02:11 PM	#4
Glen Elliott Wrangler Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Philadelphia, PA Posts: 2,898	Very understated and clean- I like it! __________________ Glen Elliott Cord 3 Films

April 20th, 2009, 11:45 PM	#6
Denny Kyser Major Player Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: Warren, Pa Posts: 785	I like it, matches the music well. Like mentioned above a very clean edit which makes it enjoyable to watch. __________________ 2 Canon XF305's Kyser Photography www.kyserphoto.com

April 21st, 2009, 11:17 PM	#7
Matt Barwick Regular Crew Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: Kingscliff, Australia Posts: 196	Thanks for the feedback guys - appreciate you taking the time to view and comment. I see the point regarding wanting to hear more audio but what I'm trying to do with these is present them to the couple as true 'teasers' - quite short and just limited pieces of vision and audio. Thanks again. Cheers, Matt. __________________ www.mattbarwickfilms.com / wedding videos gold coast / my stuff on Vimeo

April 21st, 2009, 11:25 PM	#8
Susanto Widjaja Major Player Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Sydney, Australia Posts: 622	Well done! Gotta love the car shot! she's one funky bride afterall eh? Keep up the good work. Santo __________________ If a picture is worth a thousand words, what about motion picture? website: www.papercranes.com.au \| blog: www.weddingvideosydney.net

April 18th, 2009, 05:59 AM	#2
Darren Smith Regular Crew Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Bli Bli Qld Australia Posts: 93	Hi Matt Not sure this teaser is convincing me, seems a little understated, and does not really draw me in to want to watch the "movie". I think the opening shot needs to have impact and I don't really think the flower does that. If you are set on that shot, maybe try an audio overlay to beef it up a bit? The audio of the groom seemed a bit short, I was expecting to hear perhaps a little more. I think it would have been better closing on the walking shot, composition seemed a little better and possibly may match the drawn out lyric at the end if you went from a normal to slowmo for the "goodbye". Anyway, that would be my thoughts on it, which may or may not be shared by our peers, perhaps someone else could offer some feedback for us aussies!!! :) Cheers Darren

April 20th, 2009, 12:07 PM	#3
Dylan Tobias Regular Crew Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Toronto Canada Posts: 71	I thought it was very nicely done.

April 20th, 2009, 02:17 PM	#5
Oren Arieli Major Player Join Date: May 2007 Location: San Jose, California Posts: 918	It was subtle and tastefully done with a good variety of beauty shots. I also would like to hear more from the wedding...but I can understand the need to keep it brief and allow it to 'fit' within the music. Always a challenge. So long as the bride and groom are happy, our opinions are just background noise.