A cloudy day

[Frank Aalbers]

<<<-- Originally posted by Tony Davies-Patrick : I really liked the choice of music (what was that track called, by the way?).
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<<<--Some great footage of the stormy cloud formations, and quite a nice editing job, although I think it was spoiled by some unsteady handheld scenes, judder pans, fast zooming and some soft focus on the seagull. -->>>

Yeah ! I know what you mean. I'm still learning and I really appreciate the feedback. Even the tripod shots where shaky sometimes because of the fierce winds that day.

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The very last sequence at the end of the day was the worst, like being in a rocky boat, and I think the very last section of a film needs to be as powerful as the first, so this let things down. -->>>

I know ! I was late for an appointment and running back to the car I saw that shot and had to take it, I did it handheld. :-)


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However, there was a tremendous sense of feeling and atmosphere, helped along by that strong background music. A great section of work considering this was your first time out with a new camera! I look forward to seeing more. -->>>

Thanks for the GREAT feedback ! Wanna get good at my new hobby ! ;-)

Frank