DVC10 Daniel Kohl "Somewhere under the Rainbow"

Daniel Kohl · November 1st, 2007, 03:34 AM

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Originally Posted by Dick Mays

Hey, how did your short get linked to "Two coeds shake sexy asses?"

I'm jealous.

It must have something to do with your youtube profile. I get "Granny's One Eyed Cupid Shuffle".

Go figure.

Hugh DiMauro · November 2nd, 2007, 01:37 AM

HAHAHH The feedback on this one is a riot! I got to learn a thing or two about plumbing. Technically, I loved your shots and lighting and I did not think your lead up to to the climax took too long at all. Great job.

Daniel Ross · November 2nd, 2007, 05:10 AM

Hmm... a few things bothered me.

The closeups of the eyes seemed a bit much.

Using The Wizard of Oz felt like you were relying on that a bit, so I'm not sure you can really get the credit for using that, if you know what I mean. But... it was used well. (Why not pick a scarier movie? Copyright?)

The buildup was the best of all the entires, I think, and I was held in suspense as she went down the stairs.

I found the end disappointing, though I'm not sure what could have been found to make it better.

Regardless, though, there were some good parts here, enough to move it, I think, to [at least near] the top of my list.

Again, in terms of simply being scary, this buildup was the strongest.

November 2nd, 2007, 01:37 AM	#17
Hugh DiMauro Trustee Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Central Florida Posts: 1,205	HAHAHH The feedback on this one is a riot! I got to learn a thing or two about plumbing. Technically, I loved your shots and lighting and I did not think your lead up to to the climax took too long at all. Great job. __________________ Interesting, if true. And interesting anyway.

November 2nd, 2007, 05:10 AM	#18
Daniel Ross Major Player Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Marin & Davis, CA, USA Posts: 418	Hmm... a few things bothered me. The closeups of the eyes seemed a bit much. Using The Wizard of Oz felt like you were relying on that a bit, so I'm not sure you can really get the credit for using that, if you know what I mean. But... it was used well. (Why not pick a scarier movie? Copyright?) The buildup was the best of all the entires, I think, and I was held in suspense as she went down the stairs. I found the end disappointing, though I'm not sure what could have been found to make it better. Regardless, though, there were some good parts here, enough to move it, I think, to [at least near] the top of my list. Again, in terms of simply being scary, this buildup was the strongest.