DVC22 - Shattered - Dick Mays & Roxzane Mims

[Dick Mays]

Thanks ya'll for the kinds words. Toni, I am so going to rip off your great visual of the shoe. I need that when the man picks up the girls shoe and heads through the bushes. I will reshoot that, as it is unclear that he picks up a shoe. I am also going to change the music, and add a couple of scenes and then repost for those of you interested in seeing the longer piece.

Yes, the there were audio issues, and I had to try to minimize car noise, and the noise reduction process left some voices sounding odd. Sigh. Audio is so frickin hard...

[Lorinda Norton]

Originally Posted by Dick Mays

Yes, the there were audio issues, and I had to try to minimize car noise, and the noise reduction process left some voices sounding odd. Sigh. Audio is so frickin hard...

Just one reason I don't do these anymore. If you don't have a good mic and recorder and a good boom handler it's pretty tough, let alone outside noise.

Looking forward to the re-edit, Dick. It's sad, yet, actually a sweet piece; I saw Rox's influence throughout. About the guy being creepy, the first time I watched it I kind of felt that way, but thought he dispelled it quickly through his kind actions (like mowing the area). Besides, a guy who is nice to cats has to get some benefit of doubt. The most tension for me came from that dirty sink...boy, was I glad when he cleaned it!

[Andrew Bove]

Originally Posted by Dick Mays

Toni, I am so going to rip off your great visual of the shoe. I need that when the man picks up the girls shoe and heads through the bushes. I will reshoot that, as it is unclear that he picks up a shoe. I am also going to change the music, and add a couple of scenes and then repost for those of you interested in seeing the longer piece.

I'm totally looking forward to the updated long version!

By the way, well done on the AE work with the bushes and car. I had no idea. And even knowing now what you did, those scenes in the beginning look real. Bravo!